Great to see you blogging again Mariam! I like how you set out your blog post with a photo and sentences telling us how you (and Hood) made the muffins. It was clear and easy to follow. Next time, think about giving us a list of the ingredients to use. Your muffins look delicious - what rating would you give them out of 10? Teacher tip: Use capital letters for your blog post title and to start each sentence. Spelling tips: stirring, ingredients
Ka pai Mariam! These muffins look really tasty and I like the photos that you put along with your explanation. I agree with Susan it would be good to include some more punctuation like capital letters and full stops. Keep up the great blogging!
They look delicious!
ReplyDeletethey are delicious. ࿉
Deletethank you
ReplyDeleteGreat to see you blogging again Mariam! I like how you set out your blog post with a photo and sentences telling us how you (and Hood) made the muffins. It was clear and easy to follow. Next time, think about giving us a list of the ingredients to use. Your muffins look delicious - what rating would you give them out of 10?
ReplyDeleteTeacher tip: Use capital letters for your blog post title and to start each sentence.
Spelling tips: stirring, ingredients
Ka pai Mariam! These muffins look really tasty and I like the photos that you put along with your explanation. I agree with Susan it would be good to include some more punctuation like capital letters and full stops. Keep up the great blogging!
ReplyDeleteYum!
ReplyDeleteI agree.
DeleteI like muffins too what flavour was it?
ReplyDeletethis is his brother, the flavour was actually cHEEse. (you would like it, trust me.)
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